Boring thoughts—
Replaced your bliss,
And the peace of mind;
Initiating prolonged—
Nervosity and worries
All alone with no urge
Makes you feel antsy;
Only disgruntled in—
No one except yourself.
Sometimes you wish to—
Turn off your brain,
Eat without your fingers,
Rest in peace and cease
With self-belief, win your—
Insecurities and your sloth,
Try to flee your depression;
Hanging out with someone—
Instead of hiding yourself
None but you can free you.
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Author:
Pacifique Niyitanga (
Offline) - Published: March 18th, 2022 07:08
- Category: Sad
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Comments5
Wow this was spectacular. I love a good acrostic and this one was beyond. Very true to many nowadays. "Sometimes you wish to— Turn off your brain," is such an impactful line. Very well done!
Mental disorders are real, nowadays the only powerful enemy we have is our minds. Thank you for the great comment.
noone but you can free you,very true,thanks for poem.poem on.
Thank you, my friend
Wow is right,I didn't see it as a acrostic,I love trying to write them,good birthdate.take care.
So true my friend,if we can't do it ourselves who can, except our powerful Lord
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