Bailar, es bailar
Encima del mundo, nos
Bailamos juntos
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Author:
Gingerpoetryman (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I wrote a Spanish Poem for my Poetry Unit. My Spanish teacher and my Spanish graduate mom thought it was good so I decided to upload it.
- Category: Haiku
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Hola! I'm also taking a Spanish class for my high school requirement and I'm also a fellow Spanish-speaker with an intermediate level of knowledge. My parents are Hispanic so we mainly speak Spanish. This was great, however, for it to be grammatically correct I would recommend fixing the second line. "Encima del mundos, nos," in this case your talking about "mundos" which by the "s" at the end indicates it's more than 1 world, so remember that in Spanish when you want to talk about a noun that is plural you would say "los" or "las" instead of "el" or "la." So assuming you intended it to be more than 1 "mundo" and not a typo, the correct version would be "Encima de los mundos, nos" Just a little bit of constructive criticism, but apart from that it was perfect. 💖
Yea, that was a typo. Thank you for bringing it to my attention!
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