the sun goes down
leaving the stars
such wonders of creation
humiliate my struggle
beneath the heavens
i turn away
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dusk arising (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Listen to Miles at his best.
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Quite lovely and more poignant. One of the mot efficient uses of words I can recall. Many thanks!
Wonderful words d a.
I have all of Miles recordings in my collection, wonderful sound.
Andy
Long time since I've seen such a paean to perspective, dusk.
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