this feeling is eating me alive, why do i keep letting people get this close to me hurting me
my heart is racing and i’m gasping for air
all of this because they are letting me down
i’m screaming in your ears
i’m filling up my lungs with tears
i’m drowning
and you still chose to not care
i’m disappointed with you but must of all with me for letting this happen, for not anticipate this
my eyes remain blind but my ears can see
now i know your priorities
i remain silent cuz the wind speaks to me
the secrets are being revealed
i’m screaming with all of my life
but i’m screaming out in space
you can chose to listen you just don’t
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- Comment from author about the poem: the love that i declared the effort that i put, it seams like it doesn’t matter anymore one day you’re the only person, and one day you become the second person. betrayal it’s the worse thing that someone can ever do to me, but if you chose that path it’s your choice but once you do that there’s no coming back. you only get to fool me once
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That’s really sad . Sorry your in pain .. maybe the other person is silent for a reason , I’m not sure . Take care
thanks, that’s actually helpful. i will u do too
I love the line, "i’m filling up my lungs with tears". Crying is a simple word to express a feeling, choking on your tears even is a weak figure of speech to me, but to drown in them, lungs collapsing under the weight of a broke heart. Expanding full of tears cried hard. Heart break is brutal, thank you for sharing this poem.
and to think that no one would get this…i’m the one that’s thankful, for your understanding and for your words
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