Words evade
spiralling down
as emotion stabs its knife
wounding the kitty, the wolf & me
crimson runs invisible to the naked eye
unseen in the black that surrounds me
unspoken in the dead of night
Sweet escape from the horror of my design
trailing through the object of my mind's eye
scared of the outcome of certain fantasies
slipping through the fingers like smoke
unwritten in the air between... unspoken
water mixed with poison roses
tormented possession
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Author:
kitty the naughty poet (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Had someone on a different site tell me this doesn't work... they even said I had words missing.... what do you think?
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How did Kitty get into this?! I bet you knew I would ask this! heehee.
But yes, we say 'fine' in reply to some folk. Would they want to know if we said we were 'not fine', if they only knew us as a casual friend, or as a cronie?
Haha well she wasn't fine when this was written but all good now 😁
Ohh, she's a one, she's always 'fine' I bet, with her slap and tickle adventures! lol.
This DOES work kitty, I read so much in these words that I have read it several times and get pulled further into it each time. Well written in my humble opinion.
Andy
Thanks andy, just gets at me when someone says they can't read it because it has words missing...
If I’m reading a poem and I feel it has words missing,I assume they’re not missing,..they’re just not supposed to be there. And then depending on my mood,I might fill in the “missing” words with my own. Besides,doesn’t poetry only have one rule? That being,there are no rules. Good write Katie.🥂🌹🕊🌞
I no mate just got to me cos its a depression poem that I wrote from my darkness and they say that...
Don’t let ignorance get to you Katie. You can please some some of the time,…or you can pick your friends,you can pick your nose,but you can’t pick your friends nose😂😂😂🥂🌹🕊🌞
And a great message too. We always say we’re doing ok,or fine…out of politeness🥲
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