Words evade

kitty the naughty poet

Words evade

spiralling down

as emotion stabs its knife

wounding the kitty, the wolf & me

crimson runs invisible to the naked eye

unseen in the black that surrounds me

unspoken in the dead of night

 

Sweet escape from the horror of my design

trailing through the object of my mind's eye

scared of the outcome of certain fantasies

slipping through the fingers like smoke

unwritten in the air between... unspoken

water mixed with poison roses

tormented possession

  • Author: kitty the naughty poet (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 22nd, 2022 02:07
  • Comment from author about the poem: Had someone on a different site tell me this doesn't work... they even said I had words missing.... what do you think?
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  • orchidee

    How did Kitty get into this?! I bet you knew I would ask this! heehee.
    But yes, we say 'fine' in reply to some folk. Would they want to know if we said we were 'not fine', if they only knew us as a casual friend, or as a cronie?

    • kitty the naughty poet

      Haha well she wasn't fine when this was written but all good now 😁

      • orchidee

        Ohh, she's a one, she's always 'fine' I bet, with her slap and tickle adventures! lol.

      • Goldfinch60

        This DOES work kitty, I read so much in these words that I have read it several times and get pulled further into it each time. Well written in my humble opinion.

        Andy

        • kitty the naughty poet

          Thanks andy, just gets at me when someone says they can't read it because it has words missing...

        • FallenAngel1🕊

          If I’m reading a poem and I feel it has words missing,I assume they’re not missing,..they’re just not supposed to be there. And then depending on my mood,I might fill in the “missing” words with my own. Besides,doesn’t poetry only have one rule? That being,there are no rules. Good write Katie.🥂🌹🕊🌞

          • kitty the naughty poet

            I no mate just got to me cos its a depression poem that I wrote from my darkness and they say that...

            • FallenAngel1🕊

              Don’t let ignorance get to you Katie. You can please some some of the time,…or you can pick your friends,you can pick your nose,but you can’t pick your friends nose😂😂😂🥂🌹🕊🌞

            • FallenAngel1🕊

              And a great message too. We always say we’re doing ok,or fine…out of politeness🥲



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