run low on horizon
heavy with rain
amalgamate the afternoon
as night starts to gather
behind the hills
covered with mist.
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Author:
Jon Nakapalau (
Offline) - Published: March 23rd, 2022 16:19
- Comment from author about the poem: So nice to get even a little rain here in California!
- Category: Reflection
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Comments3
when I read your comment the poem came to life,it must feel wonderful when it rains.amalgamate is now one of my fav words,good one jon,take care.
Thank you Dean!
Got a surplus here - want some?
A vivid picture though, painted with few words, Jon -thanks.
Thank you Dave!
Good words Jon.
Andy
Thanks Andy!
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