Oh! to feel the sand
that touchs seas
with trees that palm the breeze
Too shadow with a rock that blocks the sky
Too allow exotic love to dance upon my skin
absorbing as it pleases
May my soul
castle with the celtic
before I die
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Author:
dean langmuir (
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Comments2
Ohh I love this. That "exotic love" you mention is quite unique. Great job!
Thanks Rocky,just finished comment on your good write,always like feedback good or bad,may we both be exotic enough to attract some lovin
The word play! Awesome!
Thanks Eugene,take care
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