Dirty Water

Neville

Dirty Water

 

Listen to those children crying, all are hungry, while some are dying

and the water here is more alive and crawling

than elsewhere, in so many other places darling, what we gonna do ..

 

 

 

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  • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

    So sad (( wish it wasn’t like that .

    • Neville



      Thank you for your insight, support and understanding VB (utbyr) .................. Neville

    • orchidee

      A terrible situation N.

      • Neville



        .. Yes, sadly it still is .. & on a planet that is made up of so much of it too .. thank you Mr. O

      • Doggerel Dave

        Context: who, Nev? "sad,wish", "terrible", "grass, rain" - wot's it all about?

        • Neville

          844 million people lack access to safe drinking water. This is more than the combined populations of the United States, Brazil, Japan, Germany, France and Italy. Dirty water is making many people sick At any given time, half of the world’s hospital beds are occupied by patients suffering from a water-related disease.
          Dirty water is therefore clearly dangerous & every year 3,575,000 people die from water related diseases. This is equivalent to a jumbo jet crashing every hour ... N

          • Doggerel Dave

            Thanks for all that ,Nev - I understood that access to water would become a problem very soon given climate change and ever increasing world population; I was not very conscious of the situation right now.
            (Speaking of right now, The east coast of Australia has a super abundance of the stuff.)
            Easy access on the net when I knew what I was looking for. Thanks again!

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          • spilleronsheet

            A bold and essential poetry
            The world reeks of alcohol
            But no pure water for the simple soul
            As summer advances
            Not the news of nations drying
            But news of enormous population vanishing
            Very essential dear Neville
            Truly you spoke the true words
            Penned and justified

            • Neville



              thank you so much for your understanding Spills ........................ another greatly appreciated visit 🙂

            • dusk arising

              Straight away i thought of the besieged people in ukrain cities having to drink water of any kind, sewage and heating system waters. Yet in many parts of the world people have been drinking contaminated water all their lives it seems.
              Water a basic human need regardless of politics and race. Why cant we solve this basic problem.

              • Neville



                Sheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesh, I wish I knew the answer DA .. but unfortunately, I fear that it will be a long time before what many of us take for granted is available and safe enough for all those who are so desperately in need of clean water ............................................. Neville

              • Bella Shepard

                Considering that 60 % of the human body is made up of water, you'd think we'd show a lot more respect. Love what you've written.

                • Neville



                  Thank you Bella, I really do appreciate you visiting my latest little scribble .. Neville

                • Laura🌻

                  Neville,

                  ‘what we gonna do ..‘

                  What are we going to do?!
                  An easy question with a difficult answer.

                  Laura🌻

                  • Neville



                    you have hit the nail squarely on its proverbial head dear Laura ........ in the meantime, I remain deeply concerned about the whole situation ....................................... N 🌻x

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Emotive words Neville when there is so much we can do to help but those who are able to help are just not willing to help.

                    Andy

                    • Neville



                      I fear you may be write & it truly sickens me Andy ....................... N

                    • L. B. Mek

                      our H2O crisis, encapsulated
                      within such scarce, poignant words
                      poetry's aesthetics, reflecting
                      its empathetic message
                      yes, indeed
                      it will be our children
                      picking up
                      consequences: hefty Bill..
                      (heartachingly, depressing
                      to know this is our reality
                      despite all our progress)
                      an important write, dear Poet

                      • Neville



                        cheers Mek please excuse the delayed response kind sir ..



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