forever

dusk arising

 

 

 

the tide had retreated even further that morning
strolling along the waterline hand in hand
tiny footprints alongside his deep furrows
enjoying new freedom they were finally relaxed
all worry of being caught together now lost in the offshore breeze
she was a gazelle, a thing of such grace
his most beautiful little skinhead lover
her voice excited him yet more then
smiling china blue adoring eyes fired him to please her
stolen moments forever imprinted in his soul

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 2nd, 2022 07:48
  • Comment from author about the poem: First posted in 2017. I wrote this for the years ahead when the memories will fade but reading this piece will hopefully take me back to the very day many moons ago. That has been a purpose in many of my pieces.
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  • Bella Shepard

    "Moments forever imprinted on his soul", how beautifully penned. I think the soul is where our memories may safely abide, and you've captured that.

  • Christina8

    Lovely emotions and images dear Dusk! A compelling poem of love and don't we all have those stolen moments...or at least I hope we do..Christina

  • spilleronsheet

    Beautiful and serene
    Love and it’s pain
    Yearnings that grave inside
    A wonderful piece dear dusk

  • Doggerel Dave

    Memories like that can save on central heating, dusk.
    Worthwhile retaining in all it's heartwarming detail.

  • Goldfinch60

    Those moments will never leave you d a.

    Andy

  • sorenbarrett

    What a wonderful feel I had reading this. Even without paying attention to the words the cadence was soothing. The images were brilliant and evoked my walks on the beach. Lovely.



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