The Mending of a Very Broken Man

Neville


Notice of absence from Neville
If I get the thumbs up tomorrow from my Doc, I hope to be in Miami on Friday for three days before jumping ship and spending three weeks sailing around South America .. Sheesh, what we do to try n get a touch of inspiration eh' .. Take care while I'm away & please forgive any delay in my going quiet for a while .. Hope to return feeling better than I do write at this moment .. AGT's Neville 😎👍

The Mending of a Very Broken Man

 

Going down on her like that

I’m quite sure

we both found oblivion

and have since each

realised, it’s not such a dark

place after all ..

Don’t worry though .. and

welcome to my

light she said .. Oh’ by the way

I’m only here

to undertake the healing of a

very broken man ..

Nothing more than that my friend ..

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 3rd, 2022 03:53
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • orchidee

    Good write N.

    • Neville



      Cheers Mr. O ............................................................ 🙂

    • dusk arising

      I've reversed the roles a couple of times but never met (yet) one so obligingly caring.

      Initially i thought you were going to be writing about a boat (first six lines).

      • Neville



        Ah' yes, I see where you are coming from DA ...................... thank you .. you are clearly not broken but maybe only slightly cracked ... maybe .......................... N 🙂

      • Christina8

        Very nice write N! Sexy too! ...C

        • Neville



          thanks C ... Oh' you noticed that did ya you, norty girl you 🙂 N

        • Goldfinch60

          That healing can work both ways and is so important in a true relationship.

          Andy

          • Neville



            thank you Andy ................ N

          • Laura🌻

            Neville,

            I’ve read your penned words a few times…very interesting. My take on this is that your poem is not about a man and/or a woman at all. Depending on the reader, a poem may have many interpretations. More often than not, your poems do lend themselves to that.

            Laura🌻

            • Neville



              why am I not surprised my friend .. as is oft the case, you appear to be able to see write through me
              & on behalf of both my self and these words, I thank you for it Laura 🌻N



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