Beautiful things.

Job Welime

Some things are just beautiful,
Like when 'about to' becomes already done,
'When a person whose gotten used to his own voices 'I like you', never being replied to one day, hearing that blissful reply of 'I'm yours' from the lips, of the one they cherish most...Like loving each other, the way the ocean loves the waves, with the rhythm of their own current they float in the same direction and look forward to the same direction,same energy and same vision,

Like when you finally finish walking through the valley of death and finish it and in the end you finally get it that, light at the end of the tunnel actually exists,it's a thing and that to every dark night, there's a a fine bright morning,
You know what else is beautiful?
Wrecking every single sky that said to you,you can't go beyond, furthermore doing it earlier than you thought,
And finally having hands that help me sculpt my fantasies to reality is the most beautiful thing.

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Comments6

  • Goldfinch60

    Wonderful words Job.

    Andy

    • Job Welime

      Thanks dear poet

    • L. B. Mek

      another wonderful write, dear poet
      but I think this line, needs a little clarification/refinement:
      'When a person who only heard of 'I like you' finally gets to hear 'I'm yours'
      (some readers, may not realise
      the 'I like you', as being one voice
      and the 'I'm yours', as being their partners..)
      maybe something like:
      'When a person whose gotten used
      to his own voices 'I like you', never being replied to
      one day, hearing that blissful reply of 'I'm yours'
      from the lips, of the one they cherish
      most...'
      (just my 2 cents, worth
      dear poet
      if you disagree, please ignore
      and know
      that I apologise in advance
      if you deem my reply, disrespectful
      to your art, in any way)

      • Job Welime

        I really appreciate you for doing this I'll edit the poem for sure.

        • Job Welime

          I really appreciate you for doing this I'll edit the poem for sure.

        • dean langmuir

          Very nice,keep sculpting.take care

        • Job Welime

          Thank you dear poet

        • Vamsi Sudha

          Lovely poem And you get your muse back 🙂

        • Crowns4Christ

          You always write from your heart, that's a great thing to do, keep it up Job, you're very talented



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