Some things are just beautiful,
Like when 'about to' becomes already done,
'When a person whose gotten used to his own voices 'I like you', never being replied to one day, hearing that blissful reply of 'I'm yours' from the lips, of the one they cherish most...Like loving each other, the way the ocean loves the waves, with the rhythm of their own current they float in the same direction and look forward to the same direction,same energy and same vision,
Like when you finally finish walking through the valley of death and finish it and in the end you finally get it that, light at the end of the tunnel actually exists,it's a thing and that to every dark night, there's a a fine bright morning,
You know what else is beautiful?
Wrecking every single sky that said to you,you can't go beyond, furthermore doing it earlier than you thought,
And finally having hands that help me sculpt my fantasies to reality is the most beautiful thing.
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Author:
Job Welime (
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- Category: Love
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Comments6
Wonderful words Job.
Andy
Thanks dear poet
another wonderful write, dear poet
but I think this line, needs a little clarification/refinement:
'When a person who only heard of 'I like you' finally gets to hear 'I'm yours'
(some readers, may not realise
the 'I like you', as being one voice
and the 'I'm yours', as being their partners..)
maybe something like:
'When a person whose gotten used
to his own voices 'I like you', never being replied to
one day, hearing that blissful reply of 'I'm yours'
from the lips, of the one they cherish
most...'
(just my 2 cents, worth
dear poet
if you disagree, please ignore
and know
that I apologise in advance
if you deem my reply, disrespectful
to your art, in any way)
I really appreciate you for doing this I'll edit the poem for sure.
I really appreciate you for doing this I'll edit the poem for sure.
Very nice,keep sculpting.take care
Thank you dear poet
Lovely poem And you get your muse back 🙂
You always write from your heart, that's a great thing to do, keep it up Job, you're very talented
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