=showering with lilacs=

dean langmuir

I showered with the rain today

Amidst a Lilac grove

Embraced by their branches

and their Love within their mauve


With their fragrance,absorbed

I walk scenting the naked forest

with my essence

from the Lilac

that betrothed me

  • Author: dean langmuir (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 5th, 2022 07:23
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 28


  • sorenbarrett

    Such a vivid sense of beauty in the visual and olfactory as well as tactile. The wording itself was wonderful. Loved it

    • dean langmuir

      Thank you so much fir this reply,take care

    • Rocky Lagou

      May I shower with you? (I say that in the non-creepiest manner possible) No but seriously, I love your expression. These short bundles of imagery and emotion are fantastic.

      • dean langmuir

        May our souls shower in lilac groves in the future,thanks Rocky,be creepy any time you want.

        • Rocky Lagou


        • Christina8

          As you can see from my picture here, I love lilacs to the nth degree, your poem about a lilac grove was heaven! Our lilacs don't bloom til late May but I can smell them! Thank you for this!

          • dean langmuir

            I'm so glad your day was scented with my poem new friend,take care,poem on

          • Dahlia

            beautiful imagery you've presented here poet...enjoyed...Dahlia

          • Bella Shepard

            You present such a vivid picture , I can feel the rain and smell the lilacs. A beautiful piece.

            • dean langmuir

              Thank you Bella,sometimes the lilac speaks,take care

            • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

              Lovely feel to your words 🙂a beautiful poem

              • dean langmuir

                Thankyou,Violet I think the lilac was speaking not me,take care,

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