I showered with the rain today
Amidst a Lilac grove
Embraced by their branches
and their Love within their mauve
With their fragrance,absorbed
I walk scenting the naked forest
with my essence
from the Lilac
that betrothed me
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Author:
dean langmuir (
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Such a vivid sense of beauty in the visual and olfactory as well as tactile. The wording itself was wonderful. Loved it
Thank you so much fir this reply,take care
May I shower with you? (I say that in the non-creepiest manner possible) No but seriously, I love your expression. These short bundles of imagery and emotion are fantastic.
May our souls shower in lilac groves in the future,thanks Rocky,be creepy any time you want.
😂💖
As you can see from my picture here, I love lilacs to the nth degree, your poem about a lilac grove was heaven! Our lilacs don't bloom til late May but I can smell them! Thank you for this!
I'm so glad your day was scented with my poem new friend,take care,poem on
beautiful imagery you've presented here poet...enjoyed...Dahlia
Thank you Dahlia,take care
You present such a vivid picture , I can feel the rain and smell the lilacs. A beautiful piece.
Thank you Bella,sometimes the lilac speaks,take care
Lovely feel to your words 🙂a beautiful poem
Thankyou,Violet I think the lilac was speaking not me,take care,
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