I'm surrounded by much beauty unable to find my place, tears at 9am wishing the day would end.
Now this line has been written and the snot got blown away, there comes a sense of numbness it is all OK!
Those that matter will always hold a space, those that don't get on with the race.
To be or not is an endless cycle like the sun, of yesterday's dreams into today's nightmare followed by tomorrow's unknown
Who am I but a random number flickering on a roll of the dice, many say there are no accidents that's down to each to decide
My life is forever in the making until I cross to the other side, so I breath and live through each emotion putting colours in the sky
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Yesterday was amazing but this morning was not, then it all becomes part of my art that I end up grateful for. Keep making rainbows my friends, always appreciated
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Great Video, yours always are.
Wassup Dan? You say you wanted the day to be over at 9am but you don't say why. Or don't you know why?
Everyone's life is still in the making till they cross to the other side and everyone has to deal with whatever that roll of the dice dealt them.
You've got a lot more going for you than a lot of folk m8.
I was up and out by 6am all dogs walked and accounted for, the wife left with little one for a bouncy day out, big kids all asleep....
Loneliness kicked in but I sat and wrote what I need...
Now I've answered clients and feel a bit more me! (Plus the poetry)
I'm try so hard to see, thanks for watching my buddy
Yes. So so beautiful. Life is so full of purpose seeking and just finding a reason (a reason for life, a reason for the now, or a reason to live.) But I enjoy your optimistic finale. We're all coloring the world one stroke at a time.
That was definitely an optimistic ending, I loved it!!!
Life can and will be overwhelming at times,but the precious moments make the overwhelming times worth it,all we can really do is live life to it's fullest, appreciate the little things and live enjoy every day as if its the last,
Great write Dan,no matter what, the world still goes on and keeps spinning, keep writing my friend,
Many blessings to you and your family
and paint your words
with so much life
despair aside joy
equal, in measure
poetic artistry, aside acute veracity
flowing free from a mind
yearning, to ink his path
to wisdom's, light..
and gracing us all
with a step by step guide
to how we, too
can aspire to live our everyday
with such unwavering
acceptance and hope...
(I read and learn, brother
stay strong!)
Amazing dear poetic Dan….sometimes is sunny sometimes it rains and sometimes its cold…but i shall be determined to paint a rainbow even if it rains…
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