drowning in deep blue,
swimming over gray waves.
crumbling over the debris
I struggled to save,
but
I struggled for no cause.
I'm drowning in the hollow.
saltwater lies are a bitter
pill to swallow.
carrying
dead weight over my back
crashing over molten rocks.
I'm unraveling like white roses
twisted into arrows of a broken clock.
silence
filters in the bottles my bloody hands
lift and pollute the waters of cobalt.
sinking ships burden me down
as I drown in my cryptic fault.
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Very nice 👌
thanks
just a fantastic write, dear Poet
so happy for you
what a sense of achievement
you must feel, in creating
such an immersive reading experience..
thank you! for choosing to share
thank you. that warmed my heart.
Some great similes in this desperately sad write. In particular I am impressed with the line
I'm unraveling like white roses
twisted into arrows of a broken clock.
You are a very talented writer
God bless young lady
thank you 😀
Some great similes in this desperately sad write. In particular I am impressed with the line
I'm unraveling like white roses
twisted into arrows of a broken clock.
You are a very talented writer
God bless young lady
Some great similes in this desperately sad write. In particular I am impressed with the line
I'm unraveling like white roses
twisted into arrows of a broken clock.
You are a very talented writer
God bless young lady
Some great similes in this desperately sad write. In particular I am impressed with the line
I'm unraveling like white roses
twisted into arrows of a broken clock.
You are a very talented writer
God bless young lady
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