Gooder than Good Even
When I am done here
I don’t want
you to regret that our
paths ever crossed
for but a moment in time ..
When I am done here
I want you to
sit back, to smile and
maybe relax
and to think to yourself ..
My word that was so much
better than fine
it was gooder than good
by a mile and a smile even ..
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Author:
Neville (
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- Comment from author about the poem: ... when it comes to words.. sometimes only a neologism will do :)
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Naught can be gooder than memories of closeness between two like minds even for a few moments - regretting that would be an insanity - - or so methinks. - - Am loving your offering of pure neologism..........x
fantabulous dear Fay ..................................... x
You can't get better than, gooder, maybe super gooder.
I'll be spending my day now looking for neologisms and just being annoying to people.
my goodliness my friend ......... thank you kind sir ... N π
I'm still flinching at curiouser and curiouser but if betterest ever comes along i'm out of here.
When something for us is 'gooder than good' then it tickles our ego to hope that it will be remembered as such by that person too. But it took your finesse to state it so well.
you sir are tooly kind .. and let that be a lesson to ya .................................. N π
Nice write,take care.
cheers dean .. and you too my friend .... N
Good write N. I've not met many neologisms myself. Does the Co-op sell them?! lol.
probably not .................... but thanks for asking ............................... N π
or even gooder than that, dear Poet
much, much
gooder, than any level of good
you realise..
all we can do, is thank you
for sharing your genius
and gifting us, so much poetic
enjoyment
....................................................................... π
This is one of your "goodest" poems...Wonderful write dear N!
goodness me ................... how cool is that .. thank you C ... N π
"by a mile and a smile," and a half! Does that mean this is Neopoetic. Thoroughly enjoyed this one. Just to entertain for "a moment in time" is all we can expect. Great write. - Phil A.
it really is so good to see you have been here my friend .. I seriously hope you are safe and well & thank you again Phil .. N
easy rhyme moment in time
creates a natural pause
even made me smile
I am most grateful to you for visiting my friend .. thank you
Learnt another new word here, neologism. The most goodest of all? Thinking of all sorts of words now......
that's fuuken great my friend, but just you be careful π
So so lovely! I'm definitely all for neologisms in poetry as I feel there are times when we just can't express what we want via regular speech. I've used them in the past and even seminal poets like Gwendolyn Brooks have also used them. Thanks for this amazing sentiment,
You n me both Rocky ... maybe we should form a cult ................. many humungous thank you's π
Thatβs a bunch of intelligent lines
So witty dear Neville
Awaiting more neologisms to encounter
It got more gooder and gooder as I read more from you
I am delighted that spiller alighted and left something delightful behind when she left .................. x
by a mile and a smile even ..β love that line ! ))
Some connections are so nice .. and so too are some memories .
Nicely expressed poem
wow .. thank you for helping me to get off to a good start this morning my lovely friend .. I really appreciate the fact you took the time to check my back catalogue .. not everyone does that π
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