Spring molted.
Frozen days began to glow and flow like a video.
wonderful, thanks for sharing
Thank you. I'm so glad.
Yes! I love this succinct yet powerful poem. The use of the word "molt" to reference a new season is so clever.
Thank you for stating so.
Rocky, I thought "clever" before seeing your apt comment. Indeed.
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Clever... it's hard to use modern, technology-based imagery in a nature poem, but you did it nicely.
Thanks. I felt something poetic about the light of the video and used it as a metaphor for the beginning of spring.
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wonderful, thanks for sharing
Thank you. I'm so glad.
Yes! I love this succinct yet powerful poem. The use of the word "molt" to reference a new season is so clever.
Thank you for stating so.
Rocky, I thought "clever" before seeing your apt comment. Indeed.
1 more comment
Clever... it's hard to use modern, technology-based imagery in a nature poem, but you did it nicely.
Thanks. I felt something poetic about the light of the video and used it as a metaphor for the beginning of spring.
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