Spring

Moyu Aoki



Spring molted.

Frozen days began to glow and flow like a video.



  • Author: Moyu Aoki (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 14th, 2022 03:15
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • L. B. Mek

    wonderful, thanks for sharing

    • Moyu Aoki

      Thank you. I'm so glad.

    • Rocky Lagou

      Yes! I love this succinct yet powerful poem. The use of the word "molt" to reference a new season is so clever.

      • Moyu Aoki

        Thank you for stating so.

        • jarcher54

          Rocky, I thought "clever" before seeing your apt comment. Indeed.

          • Rocky Lagou

            Hey! I've seen you around MPS, and yes this poem is definitely beyond "clever." You seem to have some history on the site, I'll send you a friend request!

          • jarcher54

            Clever... it's hard to use modern, technology-based imagery in a nature poem, but you did it nicely.

            • Moyu Aoki

              Thanks. I felt something poetic about the light of the video and used it as a metaphor for the beginning of spring.



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