Haiku or Senryu :) Maybe I'll know When I'm Older.

Daves Bloke Poems

When I was younger.

I knew all there was to know.

I've learned lots since then. 

  • Author: Daves Bloke Poems (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 16th, 2022 12:01
  • Comment from author about the poem: Not sure if this is a Senryu or Haiku but either way it's my first one. Hope you like its simplicity.
  • Category: Haiku
  • Views: 18
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  • Bella Shepard

    I do like it. I'm new to this form and learning.

  • Rozina

    Good one. I learned about 5/7/5 and other forms of poetry from MPS, reading Teddy's and other poets' offerings. It's not as easy as it looks! Putting a completed story into these few syllables needs a lot of thought and redoing, again and again (for me anyway). Well done.

  • Goldfinch60

    So very true, it is a senryu.
    You cannot teach experience.

    Senryu tell of feelings and emotions, haiku are about nature.

    Amdu



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