Our survival in this life is like
the existence of the drops of dew,
fate reaps the fleeting presence
a few shine in rainbow's hue.
For our emergence as humans
conscience holds the key,
giving us the right to superiority
with an equal share of responsibility.
We grow as individuals
and get merged into the society,
our thoughts merge too
and become trends in the variety.
Like rivers merge in the sea
so do human thought streams,
everyone's thinking is crucial
we all cast our fears and dreams.
In this life, we depend on some
and some we trust being unaware,
let trust not be our convenience
for only a few are fair and square.
When we trust them blindly
at long last, we may bite the dust,
our dreams and hopes shatter
leading to general distrust.
We must aim to be cognizant
to judge other people with care,
small details of their behaviour
could be enough to make us aware.
Let's substitute reliance on others
and just be free with fortitude,
friendship, sharing and caring
should be part of our attitude.
On getting a position of authority
we must not leave gratitude,
and during the bouts of anger
peace should be our attitude.
We must stay honest
even in times of strife,
for honesty will support us
even in the afterlife.
Whatever is our position
we must aim to shine,
the dewdrops which may evaporate
but still, glitter on cloud nine.
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Author:
Max (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Every cell in any living organism is intelligent and they combine to make responsive tissues, organs and organisms themselves. Every organism is conscious and when we all think and interact we shape the thought process, culture and destiny of smaller and then bigger and further more social groups. Therefore indendent, fearless, honest thoght of everyone is going to make a difference to the entire human collective and therefore further on to the Cosmos.
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Comments4
Excellent advice. Well crafted lines.
Thank you Ms Rozina !
'Our survival in this life is like
existence of the drops of dew,
fate reaps the fleeting presence
a few shine in rainbow's hue.'
(I know these words, intimately...)
lol
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
love, all
that much needed
and timely, positivity
imbued into this write
Thank you dear Poet! Your words are my inspiration.
You capture so many thoughts and feelings I have had over time, and could never put into words as you have done. I love the collective consciousness that binds us all. You are a true artist dear friend and I linger on every word of your poem.
I understand to advice is easy but it contains the background justification and the process, how good thoughts spread and affect each one of us. Thank you for your fragrant and inspirational words.
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