Ups and downs

sorenbarrett

Walk down the road and up the street

What was beat down is now upbeat

out of downtown and into uptown

Once beat up now beat down

My car broke down now broke up

To shut down the store that had been shut up

I’m already tied up, don't tie me down

Everything is up side down

  • Author: sorenbarrett (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 19th, 2022 06:32
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments4

  • Rocky Lagou

    Quite the contradictions you portray. Truly thought-provoking and I'm intrigued to journey further. Very well done!

    • sorenbarrett

      Thanks Rocky having fun is part of what poetry is about. Appreciate your comments

    • Bella Shepard

      I love a good brain teaser and this is a gem. You have played with the oddities of our language in the most delightful way. Thank you!

      • sorenbarrett

        Thank you Bella for your review and kind words.

      • dusk arising

        Enjoyed your clever and fun words today - smiling.

        • sorenbarrett

          Thank you so much dusk your encouraging words are always appreciated

        • Rozina

          Really enjoyed reading these lines. The English language is so interesting and often perplexing!

          • sorenbarrett

            Thank you so much Rozina for your review and comment.



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