When my eyes met yours
there was an air of familiarity,
it pumped up my heartbeat
you alone have that quality.
Anything out of the way
also becomes my favourite play
I can walk extra miles
thinking about you every day.
To make you feel happy,
I expressed my feelings forthright,
it is natural to attract love
for someone happy and bright.
To sing along with the blues
my heart is not willing and free,
thinking about you lights up my mind
and then I can't hide my glee.
The inspiration is not vague
it has been quite clear
I have nothing to complain
to you ever, my dear.
Just appreciate the aesthetics
of our interactions that revell,
planetary emotional and intellectual
and beyond that at the spiritual level.
I wish you could say something
something lovely and kind,
something magnificent about us
that will soothe my mind.
The helix of fearful thought
could weave an endless spool,
invariably down-beating us
into a fathomless whirlpool.
I have mustered my grit
despite the prevailing odds,
for an intimate persuasion
I need the blessings of the gods.
Frozen are the spreads of mind
slowly flows the river of time,
you do inspire me to accomplish
and invariably the pleasure is mine.
If you still feel so much pride
something not good to keep,
please hold that mundane instinct
and contemplate with insights deep.
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- Comment from author about the poem: The one question which is personal and serious and whose outcome needs to favours our thoughts, we are ready to wait for the answer, lest the quick response may be quite upsetting.
- Category: Love
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Comments4
'Just appreciate the aesthetics
of our interactions that revel,
planetary emotional and intellectual
and beyond that at the spiritual level.'
Brilliant!
Thank you dear Poet.
Wonderful poem about my favorite subject---love. I think your rhymes and content are beyond brilliant!!! Thanks for sharing!
Thank you Christina for the wonderful words !
Love is so much more than the meeting of bodies, it's the meeting of minds, hearts, souls. Such a wonderful poem in its description of that union. Loved it!
Thank you ma'am. In my opinion, the union of opposite sexes is a divine design and not a freak accident of nature. I respect it that way with deeper connotations.
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