When I look at the skies


When I look at the skies

I feel cold and calm

I bet god mostly cared

Of his own reign

While he was

Creating us.

I don’t know

What’s the next star

gonna bring

But I’ll

make my wish

That one day

You will look at these skies with me


  • Author: Anny (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 22nd, 2022 05:45
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 27
  • User favorite of this poem: distorted mikey.


  • distorted mikey

    this was somehow uplifting and heavy at the same time, i loved it, your writing is so good!

  • Rocky Lagou

    I enjoy the way you tied in so many intense emotions into one cohesive poem. This feels seamless and almost like a call for help from the divine. Very well done!

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