starry midnight sky

empty vial

no noises that i can hear 

only the rain drops gravitating from the roof

to a leaf

 

the night, so asleep

only my own mind, speaking to me, is what i can discern 

 

it's so peaceful, yet tumultuous

as if speakers were blasting

but as if i were looking down a foggy mountain 

 

if only it were like this forever 

if only it were like this forever 

  • Author: e.a (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 22nd, 2022 08:55
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Comments1

  • Rocky Lagou

    I totally feel this sensation you convey. That line "only the rain drops gravitating from the roof / to a leaf" really struck me, probably because of the word you used, "gravitate," that gives these raindrops deeper meaning, but also it helps supports the setting you're presenting. It's peace.



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