no noises that i can hear
only the rain drops gravitating from the roof
to a leaf
the night, so asleep
only my own mind, speaking to me, is what i can discern
it's so peaceful, yet tumultuous
as if speakers were blasting
but as if i were looking down a foggy mountain
if only it were like this forever
if only it were like this forever
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e.a (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: April 22nd, 2022 08:55
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I totally feel this sensation you convey. That line "only the rain drops gravitating from the roof / to a leaf" really struck me, probably because of the word you used, "gravitate," that gives these raindrops deeper meaning, but also it helps supports the setting you're presenting. It's peace.
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