Can you hear the sparrow calling
Out to you tonight?
He could be my voice in singing
Through the dark of night.
Can you hear it the way I do?
Wrong and harsh, but true?
When will you answer me,
Maybe one day soon?
Your soul, I could see
In words that fill the room.
Can you hear them the way I do?
Crooked, lean, and true?
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Author:
cameron lynne (
Offline) - Published: April 22nd, 2022 12:36
- Category: Love
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Comments3
I love the shortness of your poems. This one is quite thought-provoking and I sense the line "Can you hear it the way I do?
/ Wrong and harsh, but true?" could refer to the hard truth we all have to accept in life. Great job!
Thank you for this kind and thoughtful comment, I appreciate it!
this is so lovely, and strangely nostalgic, it's such beautiful writing! I especially loved the ending line
Thank you for this lovely comment, I’m so glad you liked it💙
I enjoyed your lovely poem.
Thank you I’m happy you liked it 💙
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