The Hammer

MendedFences27

The Hammer

 

Your love could be like a metal hammer

 

White hot steel if you cared to pour it out

Or cold steel drawn through the sands of your doubt

 

Maybe the driving force that splits us apart

Or maybe pulls nails of pain from my heart

 

It could build a home of love

Or shatter a house of glass

 

With strength, it could knock your locked door open 

Or it could break my yearning heart open

 

It could peen the shape of a ring

Or smash what was a loving thing

 

You learned to wield it like a craftsman’s tool

And hammered me into your lonesome fool.

 

Now as I lie here bone-cold and alone

They wonder at the hammer on my stone

  • Author: MendedFences27 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 24th, 2022 19:37
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 28
  • Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek
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  • Neville


    That's one hell of a hammer you refer to Phil, smashed it so ya did sir .. and so good to see you back here my friend .. hope you are armed to the teeth ............. Neville

    • MendedFences27

      Thank you, Neville. First write in a while, hoping for more to come. Thanks again.

      • Neville



        Me too sir n truly ... N

      • L. B. Mek

        'You learned to wield it like a craftsman’s tool'..
        it amazes me, that there is
        such innate - difference levels
        and the sheer unfairness
        morbid, reality of it all..
        while I trip, to keep up
        with my all-encompassing
        firestorm emotions
        that love, inevitably
        invades my life with
        as I remain, trying
        to tiptoe, my timid rope walk
        in our supposedly, mutually
        reciprocated, relationship
        the person, across the table
        of our emotional sea
        is so calm, calculated and
        methodical
        in keeping themselves, capable
        of breaking free
        at the slightest of whim or inkling..
        just
        so unfair, the level of difference
        in our callousness of heart..
        (clearly, a write
        I related to, at such an intimate
        level
        thank you! for choosing to share, dear Poet)

        • MendedFences27

          Thank you LB for your generous words. Glad you could relate. Thanks for the FAV as well.



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