epitome

empty vial

the stars were lit and shining,

the cozy fire keeping us warm 

 

the overgrown grass grazing our bare skin

and the lavish wind stroking our faces

 

when i turned to you, 

all i saw were your eyes

surveying mine 

 

you came close, 

and that's when i knew,

 

i loved you

  • Author: e.a (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 25th, 2022 12:51
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 25
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  • Rocky Lagou

    Quite the epitome, indeed. Feels true and blissful, just hold onto that bond, and try not to let it tie you in knots and tangles.

    • empty vial

      i appreciate your comment, Rocky!

    • Crowns4Christ

      Sweet, definitely hang onto this, like Rocky said, love is a beautiful gift that God has given us

      • empty vial

        i'll definitely hold onto this
        thanks, blue orchid!

      • MR.apocalypse

        The distinct feeling between love and puppy love are hard to put in words yet you did it with ease great poem great words great heart

        • empty vial

          ah,
          thank you, MR.apocalypse!
          it means a lot to me
          have a good day, dear Poet

        • Christina8

          To add to what everyone else already said, I think it's a really sweet poem. I usually write about love and this is a great one! Thanks!

          • empty vial

            thank you for your kind words, Christina!
            have a great day



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