the stars were lit and shining,
the cozy fire keeping us warm
the overgrown grass grazing our bare skin
and the lavish wind stroking our faces
when i turned to you,
all i saw were your eyes
surveying mine
you came close,
and that's when i knew,
i loved you
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Author:
e.a (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: April 25th, 2022 12:51
- Category: Love
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Comments4
Quite the epitome, indeed. Feels true and blissful, just hold onto that bond, and try not to let it tie you in knots and tangles.
i appreciate your comment, Rocky!
Sweet, definitely hang onto this, like Rocky said, love is a beautiful gift that God has given us
i'll definitely hold onto this
thanks, blue orchid!
The distinct feeling between love and puppy love are hard to put in words yet you did it with ease great poem great words great heart
ah,
thank you, MR.apocalypse!
it means a lot to me
have a good day, dear Poet
To add to what everyone else already said, I think it's a really sweet poem. I usually write about love and this is a great one! Thanks!
thank you for your kind words, Christina!
have a great day
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