Notice of absence from Ok Waleed
I will not be posting anymore on this site, if you are interested in more of my poetry please find my works on Amazon @ Ok Waleed. Thank you.
I will not be posting anymore on this site, if you are interested in more of my poetry please find my works on Amazon @ Ok Waleed. Thank you.
Isn’t worth it
yet through all this
pain
I’ve learned
We should only place values
on ________
We should strive
to curb our passions
in order to maintain
a spiritual equilibrium
The value
people
ideas
and religion
has more value
than any wealth
We should try to overcome
our desire
for external possessions
…but what about the unseen desires
Desire better
stand apart from your contemporaries
then stand apart
from yourself
Respect
envision
other truths
Love prolongs life
There so far that’s what I’ve learned…
you’re welcome
whatever
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Author:
Ok Waleed (
Offline) - Published: April 26th, 2022 06:05
- Comment from author about the poem: Now what
- Category: Love
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Comments1
I like how you leave blanks spaces for the reader to fill out, quite creative. That line "Love prolongs life" is so true.
I wanted to incorporate the world into my writing and what better way than leaving you some space to write and collaborate with me!
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