Your mind, is a well oiled machine,
maybe, so well oiled that,
the gears start to slip.
You forgot to check the the bolts
oh my god!
you
forgot to check the bolts.
You can oil a machine as much as you want
but, if you don’t make sure it’s
grounded.....
Your mind keeps getting slicker,
going faster than ever before,
eventually, it happens.
the day you knew was coming.
you chose to ignore it
and here it is,
The Total Breakdown
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Author:
Hesper J. (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Not really sure how I feel about this but here we are !
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Comments1
An amazing metaphor. Very true message, without proper care of mental health we can "slip" into attacks and breakdowns. A great poem!
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