Broken vows
Burst blasted dreams
Bleeding thoughts
Are watering
Fetid seeds
By fragrant bones
Sprouting weeds
All overgrown
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Author:
sorenbarrett (
Online) - Published: April 27th, 2022 05:25
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Welp, pretty much epitomizes the whole banishment of Adam and Eve, very well and succinct. However, I feel this could be deeper for the relationships in today's age. Well done!
Thank you so much Rocky for your review and adept comments. You are right on The story of Adam and Eve as well as the garden can be taken as a metaphor for all of us.
You seem to have captured the mood of the time. We are dishonoring our Eden even today. Very well said.
Dear Bella thank you so much for your review and comment. You are right our own Eden has expelled us.
Very well said in your lines.
Thank you Rozina
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