Out of Eden

sorenbarrett

Broken vows

Burst blasted dreams

Bleeding thoughts

Are watering

Fetid seeds

By fragrant bones

Sprouting weeds

All overgrown

  • Author: sorenbarrett (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 27th, 2022 05:25
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  • Rocky Lagou

    Welp, pretty much epitomizes the whole banishment of Adam and Eve, very well and succinct. However, I feel this could be deeper for the relationships in today's age. Well done!

    • sorenbarrett

      Thank you so much Rocky for your review and adept comments. You are right on The story of Adam and Eve as well as the garden can be taken as a metaphor for all of us.

    • Bella Shepard

      You seem to have captured the mood of the time. We are dishonoring our Eden even today. Very well said.

      • sorenbarrett

        Dear Bella thank you so much for your review and comment. You are right our own Eden has expelled us.

      • Rozina

        Very well said in your lines.



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