A soft scent slowly discovers its way to your nose
Look over at your side and see a small bright flower
Maybe a daisy, a dandelion, or a rose
Behind you a sky full of colors
Orange fades to yellow, then to red to pink
Flying above you is a bird with its brothers
A dainty delighted deer in the shadow of the trees
Fishes gracefully swim in the glistening lake
Listen and hear the buzzing of the little bees
Feel the soft green grass underneath your feet
Maybe even drop down to lay in it
Relax, slow down your heart beat
No stress, No worry, No hurt, No pain
Just lie down and become free
Oh look at that it that the sunset sky started to rain
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Author:
Ash :) (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: April 27th, 2022 12:27
- Comment from author about the poem: When I hear the word free these are the thing(s) I think of :) and wanted to write a better poem than the last one too
- Category: Nature
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Comments3
Nature can be so relaxing and soothing .. a lovely poem .. liked reading this ! 🙂
I literally adore the rhyme scheme and alliteration you maintained throughout the poem. A "Soft Scent Slowly," a "Dainty Delighted Deer." I'm enamored by your words and I love the fact this is brought up from your ideas of freedom. Nature can really be an escape from the chaotic world. Absolutely wonderful.
thank you i hope you day has been well 🙂
Beautiful poem, so much love of life in it. Thank you for sharing..
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