Born in darkness, you exposed me to light
I was blinded and you helped me to see
For what I believe, you taught me to fight
I was ashamed, you gave me dignity
Tired, and dirty, taken from the ditch
My soul was broken and you mended it
I was oh so poor and you made me rich
Having no hope, you taught me not to quit
Weak in spirit, you built up my soul's grit
I was alone, you gave me company
Being out of place, you helped me to fit
You gave me power to no longer flee
Instead of bad humor, you taught me wit
Lost, now found, you love me for who I'll be
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Literally spectacular. I adore this strong bond you're conveying and it could truly feel like all things are possible when you have another who supports you unconditionally. Very well done, this is surely a lovely sonnet.
Thank you so much Rocky for your encouragement and lovely words. I titled it almost a sonnet because it does not have perfect iambic pentameter
The kind of love we all desire and should feel.
I am a loner. Alone in life but i know i have the love of an angel with me always. An angel who loves me for what i am and validates my existence, embraces me in times of stress, lifts me, holds my hand as I write.
Thank you for your review Dusk excuse my delay in responding but I have been away.
Beautiful, flowing, conveys such tender feelings of a soulful relationship. Just loved it!
Thank you so much Bella for your review and comments
Thank you Bella excuse my delay but I have been away
I enjoyed reading this, the lines are very meaningful.
Thank you Rozina for your review and comments
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