Nothing seems
so heavy
to a fragile heart
so broken
than thoughts
so unhappy
that they go
so unspoken
- Author: Chesterfield ( Offline)
- Published: April 29th, 2022 10:11
- Category: Unclassified
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Nothing seems
so heavy
to a fragile heart
so broken
than thoughts
so unhappy
that they go
so unspoken
Comments3
That last line, "unspoken," will speak to many. Oftentimes when we feel hurt or experience hardships we tend to be reticent with our emotions. Hope you learn to express yourself and to confide in others. Great poem.
Yes, I think people tend to curl up into little balls to protect themselves from further harm. Thanks for the comments. I appreciate it.
Your few lines have expressed so much hurt. Very well crafted.
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