spilleronsheet

Waiting

Painted spring curtains
Bed sheet of April flowers
Awaiting their bloom

Comments9

  • Nicholas Browning

    Even without the images the word paint a vivid picture. Colorful, observant lines.

    • spilleronsheet

      Thanks dear Nicholas….i just found the image very captivating and those lines were just came while admiring them….

    • Paul Bell

      If only my garden looked like that.
      Oh well, back to the weeding.

      • spilleronsheet

        Same here dear Paul….my garden full of weeds…happy weeding

      • dusk arising

        Not a fan of these japanese poetry forms but that one is a cracker spiller and goes into my fav's.

        • spilleronsheet

          Thanks dear Dusk…it surely makes me so elated to come in your fav….well just trying my hands a bit on haiku’s….I appreciate your comments a lot…

        • Teddy.15

          Superb spills a perfect 5/7/5 💖

          • spilleronsheet

            Thank you so much dearest Teddy…taking inspiration from you…trying to improvise….

            • Teddy.15

              Wow I'm completely honoured this is one of the best ever and your title so well thought out brava brava 💖

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            • Fay Slimm.

              Brilliant haiku that tells in three lines so very much - great read Spills.

              • spilleronsheet

                Thanks a lot dear Fay….you made my await worthwhile….

              • Neville



                ... perfectly formed 575's dont come around that often .. this one truly is ..

              • Rozina

                Perfection!

              • Goldfinch60

                Wonderful colour filled words spilleronsheet.

                Andy

              • Vamsi Sudha

                Ohoooo !! you are on a roll !! Enjoy !!

                • spilleronsheet

                  Thanks a lot Vamsi…I am grateful to my muse which is striking hot during my anxiety…



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