Painted spring curtains
Bed sheet of April flowers
Awaiting their bloom
- Author: spilleronsheet ( Offline)
- Published: May 1st, 2022 04:36
- Category: Unclassified
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- Users favorite of this poem: dusk arising, Vamsi Sudha
Painted spring curtains
Bed sheet of April flowers
Awaiting their bloom
Comments8
Even without the images the word paint a vivid picture. Colorful, observant lines.
Thanks dear Nicholas….i just found the image very captivating and those lines were just came while admiring them….
If only my garden looked like that.
Oh well, back to the weeding.
Same here dear Paul….my garden full of weeds…happy weeding
Not a fan of these japanese poetry forms but that one is a cracker spiller and goes into my fav's.
Thanks dear Dusk…it surely makes me so elated to come in your fav….well just trying my hands a bit on haiku’s….I appreciate your comments a lot…
Brilliant haiku that tells in three lines so very much - great read Spills.
Thanks a lot dear Fay….you made my await worthwhile….
... perfectly formed 575's dont come around that often .. this one truly is ..
Thank you so much dear Neville…
Perfection!
Thanks dear Rozina….
Wonderful colour filled words spilleronsheet.
Andy
Thank you so much dear Andy
Ohoooo !! you are on a roll !! Enjoy !!
Thanks a lot Vamsi…I am grateful to my muse which is striking hot during my anxiety…
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