Waiting

spilleronsheet

Painted spring curtains
Bed sheet of April flowers
Awaiting their bloom

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  • Nicholas Browning

    Even without the images the word paint a vivid picture. Colorful, observant lines.

    • spilleronsheet

      Thanks dear Nicholas….i just found the image very captivating and those lines were just came while admiring them….

    • Paul Bell

      If only my garden looked like that.
      Oh well, back to the weeding.

      • spilleronsheet

        Same here dear Paul….my garden full of weeds…happy weeding

      • dusk arising

        Not a fan of these japanese poetry forms but that one is a cracker spiller and goes into my fav's.

        • spilleronsheet

          Thanks dear Dusk…it surely makes me so elated to come in your fav….well just trying my hands a bit on haiku’s….I appreciate your comments a lot…

        • Fay Slimm.

          Brilliant haiku that tells in three lines so very much - great read Spills.

          • spilleronsheet

            Thanks a lot dear Fay….you made my await worthwhile….

          • Neville



            ... perfectly formed 575's dont come around that often .. this one truly is ..

          • Rozina

            Perfection!

          • Goldfinch60

            Wonderful colour filled words spilleronsheet.

            Andy

          • Vamsi Sudha

            Ohoooo !! you are on a roll !! Enjoy !!

            • spilleronsheet

              Thanks a lot Vamsi…I am grateful to my muse which is striking hot during my anxiety…



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