Emperor manning the Helm
Though I may be the Emperor among fools, steering the ship through rocky reefs Rocktyreefsrockisshududud
Strapped to the Helm
When all is failed
down with ship
Bow is wedged
taking water
slipping aft
faster still
slipping
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Author:
Pearcemelville 卯升 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: May 12th, 2022 00:02
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Comments1
This was great visual poetry. That presentation of a sinking ship with the words slowly diminishing as the poem advances is really clever. Wonderful.
Good on ya Rocky
Receiving a like is invigorating
like urges me on to continue writing
How important a mere tap of a finger can give rise to newfound vigour
Your\\\'s Sincerely,
Darryl Melville Pearce
PS the photograph
is a screenshot drawn over
with the fb Story pen, new
tool I have found Must get
my sister to screenshot her
mobile and get rid of
exterraneous writings, or
perhaps Rocky could assist
me in this matter. 🤠
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