Emperor manning the HELM

Pearcemelville 兎敏

Emperor manning the Helm
Though I may be the Emperor among fools, steering the  ship through rocky reefs Rocktyreefsrockisshududud
Strapped to the Helm
When all is failed
down with ship 
Bow is wedged
taking water
slipping aft
faster still
slipping
bubble
blub 
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  • Author: Pearcemelville 卯升 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 12th, 2022 00:02
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  • Rocky Lagou

    This was great visual poetry. That presentation of a sinking ship with the words slowly diminishing as the poem advances is really clever. Wonderful.

    • Pearcemelville 兎敏

      Good on ya Rocky
      Receiving a like is invigorating
      like urges me on to continue writing
      How important a mere tap of a finger can give rise to newfound vigour

      Your\\\'s Sincerely,
      Darryl Melville Pearce

      PS the photograph
      is a screenshot drawn over
      with the fb Story pen, new
      tool I have found Must get
      my sister to screenshot her
      mobile and get rid of
      exterraneous writings, or
      perhaps Rocky could assist
      me in this matter. 🤠



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