I connected on so many levels to your words, dear Poet
and they made me recall a song
by Wyclef, titled 'Gone till November'
and the lyrics, begin:
'I dedicate this record the carnival to all you brothers takin' long trips
Down south, Virginia, Baltimore all round the world
And your girl gets this message that you ain't comin' back
She sittin' back in her room, da lights is off
She's cryin', and then my voice comes in pow
And in the middle of the night and this is what I tell her for you
Every time I make a run, girl you turn around and cry
I ask myself why, oh why?
See you must understand I can't work a nine to five
So I'll be gone till November
Said I'll be gone till November, I'll be gone till November'..
(I'm sorry if I've completely
missed your intensions or meaning
for Your, poem
with my self-indulgent, interpretation..)
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I connected on so many levels to your words, dear Poet
and they made me recall a song
by Wyclef, titled 'Gone till November'
and the lyrics, begin:
'I dedicate this record the carnival to all you brothers takin' long trips
Down south, Virginia, Baltimore all round the world
And your girl gets this message that you ain't comin' back
She sittin' back in her room, da lights is off
She's cryin', and then my voice comes in pow
And in the middle of the night and this is what I tell her for you
Every time I make a run, girl you turn around and cry
I ask myself why, oh why?
See you must understand I can't work a nine to five
So I'll be gone till November
Said I'll be gone till November, I'll be gone till November'..
(I'm sorry if I've completely
missed your intensions or meaning
for Your, poem
with my self-indulgent, interpretation..)
That's actually better than the poem. I need to be plagiarizing these works of art.
This is hilarious! Very clever. Great job!
You need a laugh on a Tueday.
This is actually glorious Paul! Your so witty! April is just trying to go by her way and you gotta step into her shower!! 😂
I was till someone walked in on us. lol
It's cool that you made the poem rhyme in the beginning. Good job with this poem!
She deserved a good send off.
Very well constructed. Humorous, and a cool play on words. I laughed. What more can I say. - Phil A.
As long as you're laughing. lol
Hahaha, woke up this morning and read this. Shower soon. Will be laughing in there too.
Did you watch, Psycho, you be careful.
Who's April?! And how did the poetic persona get out of this bind? May must've been pretty miffed.
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