Remember Me She Said

Neville

Remember Me She Said

 

Remember me

she said ..

Come sit awhile

and sip ..

Today has not

been

bad at all,

and tomorrow

maybe will bring

a whole

new raft

of sweet market

possibilities ..

Oh’ yes indeed,

on rare occasions

such as these ..

They all did say

she seemed

more like some

kind of May queen

perhaps

than a single

solitary sunflower

basking in a

field of exquisite

tumbleweed ..

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 18th, 2022 11:52
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Caring dove

    Lovely writing ))

    • Neville



      bless you my friend ........ Neville 🙂

    • Natalia B. Odair

      Wonderful poem!

      • Neville



        Bless you my new found literary friend .............. Neville 🙂

      • Bella Shepard

        Gentle and flowing as I read it aloud. Lovely imagery of the sunflower against the backdrop of tumbleweed, such a wonderful visual. Beautiful words, beautiful poem!

        • Neville



          how very kind of you Bella .. many huge thank you's .. Neville

        • spilleronsheet

          The happiness and glow
          The sunflowers carry around
          And the aura of positivity
          So well penned dear Neville

          • Neville



            .................. thank you so very bloomin much dear spills .. Neville

          • Rozina

            Lovely lines. A beautiful picture.

            • Neville



              splendid Roz .. thank you my friend .. Neville

            • Goldfinch60

              Beautiful words Neville.

              Andy

              • Neville



                thank you oh' most golden one ....................... Neville

              • orchidee

                Good write N.
                Yep, I remember her among the hundreds of lassies I've met! lol.

                • Neville



                  how bloomin lovely ................................ N 🙂

                • Fay Slimm.

                  May Queen or no she certainly drew my attention to what she maybe - one lovely sunflower in a mess of tumbleweed needs to be remembered methinks mon ami...... another intriguing read and loved it.

                  • Neville



                    thanking you belatedly but truly Fay ... N 🙂

                  • L. B. Mek

                    a central, beautiful metaphor
                    anchoring
                    that alluring pace and poise
                    in your choice, wording
                    and drip-down, distilled wisdom
                    effect
                    in our reading of your poem, by design..
                    a comfort in a read, thank you!
                    you, at your subtle Best
                    dear Poet

                    • Neville



                      By Jove, I think he got it ........................ and how reassuringly .. cheers Mek



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