Remember Me She Said
Remember me
she said ..
Come sit awhile
and sip ..
Today has not
been
bad at all,
and tomorrow
maybe will bring
a whole
new raft
of sweet market
possibilities ..
Oh’ yes indeed,
on rare occasions
such as these ..
They all did say
she seemed
more like some
kind of May queen
perhaps
than a single
solitary sunflower
basking in a
field of exquisite
tumbleweed ..
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Author:
Neville (
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Comments9
Lovely writing ))
bless you my friend ........ Neville 🙂
Wonderful poem!
Bless you my new found literary friend .............. Neville 🙂
Gentle and flowing as I read it aloud. Lovely imagery of the sunflower against the backdrop of tumbleweed, such a wonderful visual. Beautiful words, beautiful poem!
how very kind of you Bella .. many huge thank you's .. Neville
The happiness and glow
The sunflowers carry around
And the aura of positivity
So well penned dear Neville
.................. thank you so very bloomin much dear spills .. Neville
Lovely lines. A beautiful picture.
splendid Roz .. thank you my friend .. Neville
Beautiful words Neville.
Andy
thank you oh' most golden one ....................... Neville
Good write N.
Yep, I remember her among the hundreds of lassies I've met! lol.
how bloomin lovely ................................ N 🙂
May Queen or no she certainly drew my attention to what she maybe - one lovely sunflower in a mess of tumbleweed needs to be remembered methinks mon ami...... another intriguing read and loved it.
thanking you belatedly but truly Fay ... N 🙂
a central, beautiful metaphor
anchoring
that alluring pace and poise
in your choice, wording
and drip-down, distilled wisdom
effect
in our reading of your poem, by design..
a comfort in a read, thank you!
you, at your subtle Best
dear Poet
By Jove, I think he got it ........................ and how reassuringly .. cheers Mek
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