Eye lids, natural curtains for the eyes
They are the savior of our priceless Eye(I)
As night sets in
And when the drama of the day ends
They naturally droop, to drop off
Sunlight triggers them, to open automatically
For a bright and focusing day
But at times of the day,
Let the natural curtains be closed intentionally
When the deep inner world, is being explored
And when the Eye turns inward for the "I" !!
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Author:
Vamsi Sudha (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Thoughts in my meditation !!
- Category: Spiritual
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I've always had problems with ripping curtains. Maybe that's why I cant meditate.
Dear Poet , time when the curtains are closed and that's when eye turns inward. You would surely be able to do it.
intriguingly, thought provoking..
thank you! dear Poet
Thanks Dear Mek ! your comments always awaited and appreciated.
Literally glorious! Such a clever metaphor for our eyelids. I feel that one is most connected to their true selves when they're doing what they love. So for some that can be meditation, and for others it can be things like writing poetry. The homophone you presented as well with the "eye" and the "I" is so smart. Wonderful!
Thanks Rocky !! Yes true meditation is surely meditation when the all the senses are focused at one point called the "Expression of Creativity" .
Thanks for observing the "I". There's lot of scientific base to it, some other day will get to it...:)
This is so true dear Vamsi…thanks for reminding, i have been missing this ritual nowadays and that’s causing a tremendous backlash for me…a beautiful metaphor and cleverly crafted lines….
Dear Spiller, Its the need of hour for you. Get to 10min of meditation and see your would excel beyond your imagination. thanks for your wonderful comments as usual.
I will do this from this instant….
Very clever and lovely lines. Super read.
Dear Rozina, thank you dear !!
When we withdraw behind those curtains, so as not be distracted by the visual, we allow light to shine on the inner knowledge, as are yours words of wisdom
Yes Dear Poet. thanks for stopping and commenting.
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