THe evaluation of our world

The rasing seas

The stock market fall blindly we are part of it all

The war that we fight is a war that is small 

When the battle is in your self after all

You look around and what do you see

I see hate gun violence and greed

I look at the word which I “BELIEVED”

Could be better could be something 

The death toll rises our people crawl 

Because then we won't bruise when we fall 

The anger the greed the death  the hate

Is what I evaluate 

  • Author: Mr,apocalapse (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 23rd, 2022 08:09
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • crypticbard

    Good observations. These wedded with counsel of past observations and future plans should help with action toward a better tomorrow. Thanks for sharing.

    • MR.apocalypse

      and thank you for your feedback it really means a lot have a good day

      • crypticbard

        Have an awesome day!

      • Rocky Lagou

        Such a sad reality we're living in. I wish peace could be seized, but it seems we're far from it. All we can do is hope and spread kindness.

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