all in a dream

dusk arising

 

 

 

entranced aslumber o'er woodgreen moss
chanced whispers call and dance
into a dream a woodnymph trilled
to steal of hearts romance

            gossamer wings paint airy trails
            through twighlight's eerie hue
            where floating fairy fingers lead
            beneath bows of deja vu

            and there a star, a dream fortold
            of love so long subdued                             
            yeilds a clue and stole a heart
            a leaf shaped silver shoe

through carpet green oer tumbled root
bracken thorn and sinued vine
flight of nymph guides light of moon
race of heart and dreams entwine
          
           across the seeds of hope's reveal
           bathed in starlight's mercurial pond    
           the princess of the greenwood dell
           sensed promise of beyond

           upon the shore of restless night
           now a saviour figure stands
           the key of future promise held
           a leaf shape in it's hand

betwixt the realms of nightfalls sigh
and leafsfall daylight's drone
where woodnymph play neath dragons beard
a dream may rest its home

for each sleeping prayer on lip becomes
words of woven quilt to treasure
when midnight creatures fascinations bring
to our slumbers worthy pleasure

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  • Rocky Lagou

    Wow, this was truly one heck of a journey Dusk. Thanks. Your imagery is phenomenal and this painted world feels so vivid and enticing. It's all one ethereal dream.

    • dusk arising

      This is something I wrote a while back. It's good to reflect back upon writing this because I was in a rare poetic frame of mind that allowed romance with this fantasy world. An other worldly state really which i wish i could achieve more often. I can't force whatever it is but looking back I'm pleased it happens now and again.

    • Fay Slimm.

      Well after reading this piece of classical prose I shall look forward to dreaming of those fairy people as sleep descends my dear friend. - You excel with this write on night's promise - must add this gem to my faves..

      • dusk arising

        I wish I could find this frame of mind more often. Thank you Fay.

      • Saxon Crow

        You can never go wrong with a fairy tale poem. Wonderful stuff Dusk. I had to reread it a couple more times. Loved it.

        • dusk arising

          Thank you Saxon, pleased you enjoyed it.

        • Aradhya

          wow, just wow! this is truly an exceptional piece.
          ' gossamer wings paint airy trails
          through twighlight's eerie hue'
          so so very beautiful, dear poet!

          • dusk arising

            Thank you Aradhya, I'm pleased you liked this piece.

          • spilleronsheet

            An incredible imagery
            Took me on a roller coaster ride
            Well worded dear Dusk

          • Bella Shepard

            The scope of this poem is just breathtaking. The rhyming pattern and cadence is sublime. Would that such dreams may come. Absolutely beautiful!

            • dusk arising

              Oh I'd love to have dreams such as this. Thanks Bella.

            • MendedFences27

              This is great stuff. I personally love story poems, and this is a worthy portrayal of their value. The fantasy setting is ideal. the tone of the poem is spot on. Your phrasings and colorations are exquisite. "A leaf shaped silver shoe" is a masterful invention. What a dream! - Phil A.

              • dusk arising

                To be honest I don't know where it came from. I'd love to be this creative more often rather than voicing memories or my grumbles on here. Thank you MF.

              • Rozina

                Gentle, serene, dreamy, a fairy tale.....
                I hope to have such a dream tonight.

                • dusk arising

                  May you have many such dreams find love lingering there.

                • anna36

                  Love the style of this. My favourite line is a leaf shaped silver shoe

                  • dusk arising

                    Yes, they don't sell those on amazon do they LOL. Thank you anna.

                  • Neville



                    Your pen most surely has a golden nib my friend ........... this is more than just dreamy ...... Neville

                    • dusk arising

                      As I've said in comments here, I wish I could find the frame of mind i was in whilst writing this more often. I'm wondering whether some of it came out of a bottle LOL.



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