Making music
The radio in my head keeps playing the old songs
Music, I remember as Rock or Doowop
or sad songs from our yesteryears.
It was then we first met at a sock hop.
I was with Linda, and you had come with HIM.
Trouble was in the wind.
I never cared for Linda, and you were using him.
After that he and I squared off a couple times
down beside the railroad tracks.
It was mostly called a draw.
You went from boy to boy
until I told you how I felt.
We went to the Junior prom, and it lasted until graduation.
We separated after high school.
You went away to college, and I enlisted...
I joined the Navy, and you were at school in Boston.
When I was discharged, and you had graduated
we met again.
I was working at the factory
and you were now a nurse.
We happened to be in the same club one night.
You, with a few friends from the hospital
and me, with a pal from work.
I asked you to dance
and that was the beginning of our life together.
We were married in the local church
and settled down just outside of town.
I still remember the phone call:
There had been a crash.
You and the baby were in serious trouble
and that’s when I lost you…both.
It was then the music started to play
and it’s been here ever since.
They don't let me out much any more
and they say it’s not 1957
But how can that be
for I still hear the music and remember
when you both went to heaven.
- Author: MendedFences27 ( Offline)
- Published: May 29th, 2022 14:52
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Comments2
Good words Phil with a very emotive ending.
Andy
Thanks, Andy. Glad you enjoyed it.
(from
'or Doowop'
to
'a sock hop.'
your melodically, melancholic tonality
grabbed a thread in my chest
and helped me glide
through a life's
remembrance of grace
worded into acceptance
by your poetic eloquence..)
like Teddy.15
I hope this is a work of fiction
and I can simply, marvel
at your creativity's empathy..
but if as I fear, there's
some unimaginably harsh
life experiences
in the subtle mourning, imbued
in such, gasping lines of sincerity:
then, I simply have no words
all I can do
is laud your bravery
and champion
your exemplary, utilisation
of Poetry
to share, heal and help..
thank you! dear Wise poet
Thanks, L. B. Yes, fiction based on life experiences. That's what we poets do. Thanks again for your feedback and encouragement.
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