bad habit

dusk arising

 

 

 

You
the bad habit 
i had no answer for.
Running from you
and coming back
for you on your back.
For you i'd fall
and never never
since nor before
can i recall two bodies
in such abuse
of what should be love.

 

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 30th, 2022 00:28
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  • Goldfinch60

    Emotive words d a.

    Andy

  • spilleronsheet

    Very intriguing…and the bad habit did get a poetic voice….

  • L. B. Mek

    'entangled, all elbows and knees
    yet, their feelings make music...'
    truly, no two love's are the same
    if it works, who are we to judge?
    a succinctly incisive, shorty
    thank you! Dusk

  • arqios

    “In what should be love,” indeed!

  • Neville


    I know I shouldn't but I do kinda like this .. an awful lot 🙂



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