Glass covered sidewalks
Twinkling under street lights
They are city stars
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Author:
primrose mandarin (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: June 2nd, 2022 09:25
- Category: Haiku
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Glass covered sidewalks
Twinkling under street lights
They are city stars
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Comments4
Wow, "city stars," one hell of a metaphor
Thank you! Just like a real star, you don't want to get too close, ha!
Oh I love this!
I really enjoyed how you kept it short but still so meaningful.
Maybe check out my new poem aswell, I'd be really happy about it. If you want to, leave a comment and let me know what you think about it.
Short and sweet but really deep! Love how you have constructed it!
Thank you! I usually don't write poems that stick to any traditional form, but Haikus are always fun.
I agree!
I have never seen a poem that could have so few words YET still remain to completely astonish me and be exploding with raw emotion and metaphor
Thank you so much! This is such a kind comment!
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