27TH STREET

morange

Glass covered sidewalks

Twinkling under street lights

They are city stars 

  • Author: primrose mandarin (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 2nd, 2022 09:25
  • Category: Haiku
  • Views: 13
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  • Rocky Lagou

    Wow, "city stars," one hell of a metaphor

    • morange

      Thank you! Just like a real star, you don't want to get too close, ha!

    • languale

      Oh I love this!
      I really enjoyed how you kept it short but still so meaningful.
      Maybe check out my new poem aswell, I'd be really happy about it. If you want to, leave a comment and let me know what you think about it.

    • JudyStella

      Short and sweet but really deep! Love how you have constructed it!

      • morange

        Thank you! I usually don't write poems that stick to any traditional form, but Haikus are always fun.

        • JudyStella

          I agree!

        • a thousand wishes

          I have never seen a poem that could have so few words YET still remain to completely astonish me and be exploding with raw emotion and metaphor

          • morange

            Thank you so much! This is such a kind comment!



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