Came The Days.

Goldfinch60



Came that day,

The day of your birth.

You cried to show all,

Show all that you were alive

And the world rejoiced,

Rejoiced at your birth.

 

In your life you gave all,

Gave all to help others.

And they loved you so much

That when you died

The world cried,

But you rejoiced.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 7th, 2022 00:54
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just a thought.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 43
  • Users favorite of this poem: Paul Bell
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  • Neville



    I get this entirely Andy .. so very sadly enjoyed ................................. Neville

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Neville, we must do the best for all in our lives.

      Andy

    • orchidee

      A fine write Gold.
      That must have been 50 million years ago when the world rejoiced that you and I were born! Was there anyone else about then?! lol.

      • Goldfinch60

        Apparently there were not and the way the world is going nobody will be there in a few years time when we leave this earth.

        Andy

      • orchidee

        There is a quote 'Live so as to be missed [when you're gone]'.
        Ain't no one gonna miss my singing; they won't be crying over it. Well, they will - crying out of relief! heehee.

      • Fay Slimm.

        Your words set out the true meaning of life that if well spent will end in satisfaction. Good to read that doing our best is the right way to live - thank you for sharing this Andy

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you Fay, I wish all would do their best for others then we would live in a much better world.

          Andy

        • dusk arising

          What to do with all the wisdom we take with us?

          • Goldfinch60

            That we should have passed on to those that were prepared to listen d a.

            Andy

          • L. B. Mek

            sadly, I too
            know the truth of these words
            'that's why, we
            who endure, must strive
            to make the best of life!'
            thanks Andy

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you Mek, yes we must make the best of our lives.

              Andy

            • Paul Bell

              Now they just rejoice when the lottery ticket comes up. Social media has replaced god and good in favour of, me,me,me. The world is in the hands of a madman at the moment. Beats me why we're still hanging around pampering him.

              • Goldfinch60

                Very true Paul but within ourselves we must do the best we can to help and guide those around us.

                Andy



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