Over and Out

Neville

Over and Out

 

Dont stop to think

not even

for one moment

you have

anything to prove ..

Not to me

anyway my darling

I only

ever wanted the

very best

for you, my love ..

You just

seemed to read me

wrong ..

Each time I opened

my mouth,

was like, I just put

my damn

whole foot inside

that’s all

at least for now, so

ciao, I am

over, done and out ..

 

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 8th, 2022 03:42
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments6

  • Fay Slimm.

    Sad but true incompatibility is hard to deal with in a relationship where blame if felt must be a shared thing methinks..... at least firm decision in your final lines meant a complete break. My parents were in the same hard space for as long as I can remember - - an honestly written haunt of a read Nev...................x

    • Neville



      here's thanking you too my dear lady Fay ............ x

    • dusk arising

      Your words speak to me of a man who knows and values himself sufficiently to follow his right to a relationship where he will shine within the light of a star he holds above all others.

      • Neville



        cor blimey guv'nor .. take it easy .................................... Neville 🙂

      • orchidee

        Good write Neville.
        i got a mad picture - the mind boggles - of ya hopping along the street on one foot, with the other foot in your mouth.
        Btu why so mad a pic? says Fido. 'You do that every day on my walkies' he says to me. lol.

        • Neville



          thank you Mr. O ........................... you should see me on a bad day 🙂

        • MendedFences27

          Best to be clear of that temptation. It seems you would always be misunderstood. Nothing could have saved it, except for you to be someone you are not, and that would not be wise. Maybe, be thankful for your escape. - Phil A.

          • Neville



            believe me, I was .. and thank you for calling in ............................... Neville

          • Draven

            Say what you mean, mean what you say and yet sometimes the listening ears decide to hear what they want. Very frustrating! Sending love, Neville. Nicely written.

            • Neville



              absolutely true my very dear Draven ............. and it is so good to see you back here .. I do hope you are gonna stay now .. x

            • Goldfinch60

              Sad words Neville, sometimes people just do not understand the truth that is within us.

              Andy

              • Neville



                Now aint that the darned truth Mr.GF60 ...

                Neville



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