Blueledge

Mindfulness

Here we are together. 

Entangled and entwined. 

I have my tongue inside your ear 

searching for your mind. 

 

Then sensing no resistance 

a small pressure is applied. 

My tongue just slid right through your head 

and out the other side. 

 

Comments9

  • Goldfinch60

    The brain can disappear in true love.

    Andy

  • Blueledge

    This is very true Andy.

  • orchidee

    Good write Blue.

  • Blueledge

    Thanks.

  • L. B. Mek

    it all
    began with 'a - hey'
    so, they all say...
    lol
    (a fun read, quirky and
    open to interpretation)
    thanks for sharing

  • tallisman

    Brilliant!

    • Blueledge

      Thanks. Much appreciated.

    • sadkw33n

      That was fun to read. Nicely done. Always a pleasure to check your poems.

      • Blueledge

        Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.

      • crypticbard

        There is a tinge of sadness on the one end, from the image: "in one ear and out the other" and a closeness of such intimacy and finally a kinda gross image of dredging an uncleaned ear canal. LOL, sorry for the active imagination, Blue.

      • Blueledge

        Your active imagination is always welcome.



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