What Rain? Tanka

Goldfinch60



Rain was predicted,

But it never rained on me.

The sun shone on me

Bringing such light to my world

In all the years of my life.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 26th, 2022 01:19
  • Comment from author about the poem: Life is full of sunlight.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 12
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  • Saxon Crow

    Followed by a lovely tan

  • orchidee

    Good write Gold.

  • arqios

    Solar powered gadgets won't be lost or useless to you!

    • Goldfinch60

      Certainly not cb.

      Andy

    • dusk arising

      Bloody weather people. Why dont THEY go on strike. We could take it in turns predicting the weather, we might be more accurate.

      The sun shines on the righteous... or was it Evesham?

      Keep applying the sun lotion whatever you do.

      • Goldfinch60

        True words d a. "What is the weather like?" "Look out the flaming window!"

        Andy



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