Just when I thought I was done.
You came along and showed me my destiny was not to be alone.
You’re were my breath of fresh air my answered prayer.
You made me see a brighter day and brought alive what a thought was dead in me.
You warmed my cold heart, took away all the strain, releasing me of pain, making me feel like a woman again.
With constant dedication and concern you gave me a incomparable newness.
Laughter replaced sadness.
Just when I thought I was done and to my surprise you came along.
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Author:
churd17 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This poem is the love I dream of after dealing with the disparity of being unloved.
- Category: Love
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Comments2
I loved this poem, I only wish that could happen to me.. nicely written
Thank you!
your welcome
dreaming of it, is half the journey
towards having it be realised
in your everyday reality..
love, thy self
first!
above all else, treasure
your worth
without you needing anyone
to value, you!
and its ok, if you think
you ain't all that, today
for hopefully, you have
the rest of the day
and your remaining, tomorrow's
to work towards being the person
you want to become..
then, as your path becomes
easier to traverse
and you become too, busy
to worry about love
or being acknowledged
when
you can look in the mirror
and smile at that imperfect
reflection
cos you know, how hard
you worked, to get where you are
to Realise, your dreams
then
goodness, will be drawn to you
and from that will blossom
the connection that will gift you
what you need in life..
but
it all begins, when You
love Yourslef, like
you wish others, would Love
You..!
(forgive my tangent
I meant no disrespect, sadly
so many of us, waste our time
waiting for love
when, its more like
Love is waiting on Us
to fall in love
with ourselves..!)
Thank you and beautifully written,
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