Blood moon

tallisman

Rhiannon,  spare a thought for me

Lost in a dark confusion

Hopelessly I’m cursed to be

Living in a sad delusion

 

Rhiannon, it’s a time of  hope

Over far to soon

I don’t need a telescope

To heed your blooded moon

 

Rhiannon, the sky bleeds red

Tell me where I have offended?

Is it something I have said

Or as nature intended?

 

Rhiannon, Celtic goddess, I kneel before you

Pray to the blood moons power

Take my hopes and bless them too

In this my darkest hour

  • Author: Tallisman (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 29th, 2022 00:41
  • Comment from author about the poem: Don’t really know where I was going with this! Not my best….
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • JudyStella

    Rhiannon, the sky bleeds red
    Tell me where I have offended?
    I like this line, it feels like you feel responsible for a natural occurrence that is not in your power to control. I don’t know why but I thought of a toxic relationship and guilt tripping 😅

    • tallisman

      Yikes! I can see your point - it’s not me at my best, I prefer “midnight hour”, I think I was having a bit of writers block over the weekend! , probably that’s where the desperation was coming from!

      • JudyStella

        It’s still a good one!

      • arqios

        Let’s agree to blame the blood moon for that 🤣 Thanks for sharing!

      • tallisman

        A pleasure, thanks for reading!

      • Raven333

        Nice poem, I thought you nicely wrote it and the rhyming was very good,

        • tallisman

          Thank you Raven!

          • Raven333

            Ypur welcome tallisman, loved your rhyme.



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