Dream Keepers.
Stretching and shouldering night away a sun crouches
to birth black's ousting
by one more empty circle of dark's hollowed pouches
then outs in sparkling showers.
Spangled with myriads of star-labour's soft serenades
of lullaby pieces
dream-keepers experience melodies as wake favours
tunes of relaxed breathing.
Silvering surface shivers with night-eyes of glittery dust
sighted with doze-swift
flight each soul's winged journey while re-living mind
thoughts to those sleeping still.
Glimmers on vision's sighting reveal light's reception
while untrodden horizon
newly writhing in close-capped eye of inertia's frame
stirs to rouse before rising.
Piercing the brain time's needle regathers past threads
and remembers that more
sown seed means now-set dreams need re-collecting
in kept memory storage.
Wider sighted with lethargy over, stretching follows
and night-slumber now done
mind must hurry to open partitions between yawns
of torpidity so aliveness is won.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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Comments6
Brilliant!
so deep, thank you dear Fay
You are so kind to visit and read my take on dream-keepers L.B. - thanking you muchly.
Good write and pic Fay.
Glad you enjoyed both pic and verse Orchi.
Always elegant and beautiful
So pleased you enjoyed Dream Keepers dear Dove.
May that aliveness that comes every day be forever with us all Fay.
Andy
this is magnificent Fay, they just dont get much better .. both word and structurally near perfect .. Absolutely dreamy .......................... x
Delighted you felt the meaning of Dream Keepers dear Nev. - thanking you muchly for your supportive and welcome comment.
What a beautiful Poem to accompany a stellar photo. 'Dream Keepers" awaken and remember their dreams. Others like me cannot remember them. To be able to recall one's saved dreams must be a wonderful reality for some.
Your poem makes the Sun seem alive. Your "Dream Keepers" gloriously awaken slowly to the beauty of the Sunrise. It is a picture of a poem. A must have for sure. - Phil A.
You are kinder than kind in your supportive review - thanking you ever so much Phil - so good to know you have this piece in your list of favourites too.
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