We were friends when we left our home streets
When we first set off down that track
So we started sitting in the front seats
But finished spending time in the back
We had decided to go on a road trip
From John O’Groats to Lands End
We had never intended a courtship
We thought we were just good friends
We’d been neighbours since we children
You were the girl next door
I don’t remember a time when
We’ve never been friends for sure
But somehow spending this time together
Just talking the day away
Well I could do this forever
I’m glad you feel the same way
I think by the time the trip ends
Our families will get the shock of their life
We started this trip as just friends
And came back as husband and wife!
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Author:
Tallisman (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: July 10th, 2022 03:38
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Friendship that blossoms into love, what could be better? This poem has such a sweet, gentle nature. I loved every line.
Thanks!
What a great poem about love and how it started. kinda took me back myself. Great write..
Thanks Raven,, glad you enjoyed it , my friend. Would that we could turn back the clock!
What a wonderful story within the poem. I thoroughly enjoyed it, loves young dream ! The only reason I can see for wantig to be turning back the clock would be to start your journey at Lands End, stopping off at Gretna Green to wed over the anvil, on your way to completing your journey to John'O Groats !
What a wonderful story within the poem. I thoroughly enjoyed it, loves young dream ! The only reason I can see for wantig to be turning back the clock would be to start your journey at Lands End, stopping off at Gretna Green to wed over the anvil, on your way to completing your journey to John'O Groats !
Yeah, I didn’t think it through😊, my bad! Thanks for reading
Sweetest poem I've read. Loved it! You did a great job on this one too! I'm hoping to see more.
Hi Sadq, there will always be more!
Thoroughly enjoyed this! So happy to hear a love like this still exists!
Glad u liked it!
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