your harmonic words still breathe under my skin,
still reminds me of your sighs
when we quenched each other's thirst,
the thirst that we didn't know existed
until your eyes rested upon mine,
every smiles we shared brought me to the place
where i understood love,
your smile made my every morning brighter
outshining the sun,
i am indebted by the immense affection you showered on me,
when you kissed me like i was the destiny,
i hugged you like you were the hope,
that's when i wrote a novel on the space of your skin,
the art that no one can conclude!
- Himanshu
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Author:
Christopher Luken (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: July 20th, 2022 11:04
- Comment from author about the poem: A battle between regrets and hope, that's how this poem was created.
- Category: Love
- Views: 39
- User favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek.
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Comments3
It was a great write... I love the last stanza about hope and love... Feeling truly shines through those lines
After all, we write to express our feelings, don't we?
And, Thank you!
Yes, most of my poems depicts what i feel...
well, this is just Awesome!
so many lines I could highlight
which means the entire poem
is a highlight reel of poetic eloquence!
thanks for sharing, such a great read
Thank you Mr. Mek!
I'm thankful you liked my poem.
Hope you like my future poems too.
Have a great day!
very nice sensational poem, I really enjoyed it. very good write.
Thank you Raven!
You've been a supporter since Day 1, I'm thankful for that.
Always here for you and you have some talent dear.
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